1. I had forgotten I’d ordered muffins. Toasted, buttered and served with a chunk of Black Bomber cheese.

1b. Later, Giant Dairy Milk Buttons sucked into they melt.

2. The cosy cat cuddled into my belly as I read; the dog huffs and puffs on the other side of the cushion I’m using as a pillow.

2b. Lily forgets her limp when there is a new bone to chase.

3. The paragraph is painful to read because it feels too real. Wonderful writing though.