1. A dozen little birds in the elder tree. Half flee as soon as we see them, as if they suddenly know they’re being observed.

2. The rumbling drum underneath the song.

3. Something is wrong with the design but I can’t tell what. I tweak some things and take a long look from a long distance but it’s only when I go back to my original reference material that it clicks.

3b. Freehand, with a pen, it’s a lot easier to make even more improvements.